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Lassy, I think you did great. For a free verse expert such as you, to change over to rhyme and meter in such an excellent way is impressive. Nice to see you here!
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Dutchie, you are turning into a songwriter! I would love to see the melodies attached to some of these ideas.

Oh, in the first sentence, I think you mean alive instead of alife....but it's still amazing what you can do with English, since it's a second language to you. Keep it up!
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I wrote a song when I was 15, but I can't seem to find it. I'll continue looking.

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Ok, so I couldn't find the one I wrote when I was 15, but here's one I wrote just over 2 years ago.


Now There's You


I never really knew,
That there was someone like you.
I never really imagined,
That love could be another language.
I never really saw,
That love was the ultimate law.


(chorus)
Now there's you.
Now I speak a language so new.
Now I see love, the only law that's true.


I never really knew,
That I could love like I love you.
I never really imagined,
That I could speak a wordless language.
I never really saw,
That I could follow just one law.


(chorus)
Now there's you.
Now I speak a language so new.
Now I see love, the only law that's true.


I never really knew,
That my heart was meant for you.
I never really imagined,
That my heart spoke a foreign language.
I never really saw,
That my heart overruled my mind's law.


(chorus)
Now there's you.
Now I speak a language so new.
Now I see love, the only law that's true.


(bridge)
Now I know.
Now I imagine.
Now I see.


(chorus X2)
Now there's you.
Now I speak a language so new.
Now I see love, the only law that's true.


Arana Darkwolf

[This message has been edited by rachaelfuchsberger (10-10-2009 11:11 PM).]

 
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