Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
DOn't worry, Rose...I'm patient
Rachel..very good. I see you are paying attention to meter and that's a good thing!
One thing, though...
So THAT i MIGHT just KEEP my MIND
Yes, if I follow your accents, that works well. However, without them being capitalized, I would not have followed them. I would have read...
so that I MIGHT just KEEP my MIND
That's always a tricky area, trying to figure out how someone else will read it. The best rule of thumb is....if there's any chance they will read it differently, change it. You could say, for example,...
so I just might not lose my mind
That can basically be read only one way and solves the problem.
Just consider that at times. Your assignment is fine