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Help Me, Rondel!!!

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25 posted 04-09-2011 07:37 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I'm guessing those are Klondike  bars, Alison???

What a wonderful surprise to have you show up and cover past assignments....and do it so well!!!!

With the exception of cringing while reading "for you I pine", it's a terrific piece, representative of your normal excellent work.

A tip o' the Balladeer hat to ya!
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26 posted 04-09-2011 08:29 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Yep, Klondike bars --- love 'em.  I know the "for you I pine" was kind of icky.  Here's another attempt.

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Alison's Addiction

Dreamy thoughts occupy my mind
Fuel desire to make my heart race
Kidnap me from a mundane grind
Nothing ever will take your place

All agree I was born to pine
Satisfaction, your kiss will grace
Dreamy thoughts occupy my mind
Fuel desire to make my heart race

Such addiction wraps like a bind
Oh! Hide my need and leave no trace
Ice cream bar crumbs cover my face
Many kinds remain to taste and find
Dreamy thoughts occupy my mind

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I have a few assignments to catch up on. So, I'll be working on them later (I hope).

Thank you, deer friend.

xoxoxo
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