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Time for an Etheree(al) Challenge!

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Earth Angel
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Hi, Elias! Great Etheree! You certainly are starting out on the right foot! I'm a PW newbie and I am learning a great deal from our venereal teacher! Ooops! "venerable" teacher! lol Welocme aboard!

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Balladeer, here I come again with another Etheree. This time I made it a bit more difficult by rhyming alternate lines.

Poppa Pips

On
the news
this morning,
I heard that “Blues
Singer ~ Poppa Pips,
loses his cool and spews
epithets during concert!”
The fans went wild and their loud boos
could be heard more than a mile away!
~ I wonder what it was that lit his fuse?

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There you go, Elias! Nice work!

I like it, Angel! Good lines and nice style...a complete package..and so is the poem!
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Thank you all for your encouraging comments.

I hope to improve as a writer by doing more and more of these challenges.
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Balladeer ~ I'm pleased my poetic package appeals to you. How's that for alliteration, Teach?

Elias ~ I too, enjoy the support and guidance that is offered in this comfortable classroom atmosphere.
We learn and have fun at the same time!


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Chasing Dreams
By Paul Wilson


Why
did you
run from me
I thought you knew
that my love is real.
Lets start our lives anew
spending the rest of our days
together always just us two
riding rainbows high above the clouds
chasing dreams my love since we said I do

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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Well done, Paul, with a nice romantic touch
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Mike... Thanks I hope being tardy with this homework doesn't get me in hot water with the teacher.

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
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No way...we have no deadlines here. We're here whenever you get around to us!
 
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