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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2008-11-07 11:41 AM


Way down under it's said that when shove comes to push
you ain't right in the head to see moose in the bush.
But , down Byron Bay way there's a store bears my name
though suffice it to say we're not one and the same.

If you go walk-a-bout take this doctors' advoose
and don't feed brussel sprouts to " Marsupial Moose"
as extreme flatulence will most likely result
making them quite incensed adding to the tumult.

Angry Penguins agree, give these moose a wide berth
they've caused people to flee from Canberra to Perth,
Jindyworobaks state they no longer exist
choosing to relegate them to legends and myths,

but the bush people know it's the ones you can't hear
that will lay you down low, worse than ol' Balladeers'


[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (11-07-2008 12:13 PM).]

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Balladeer
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1 posted 2008-11-07 03:58 PM


Aside from the unforgivable sin of trying to rhyme result and tumult, this entry is fine and Dundee

Good research, good use of local lingo and landmarks and good invention of a new animal, the marisupial moose.

Not bad, mate

Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2008-11-07 04:13 PM


Balladeer,
Cor, and blimey! Can't take credit for the new species though, apparently if you're researching "marsupial mouse" and you mispell it you get everything you needed to know about "marsupial moose" but were afraid to ask ( ain't technology great?!)
Thanks,
Doc

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