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It's a Bird! It's a Plane! It's a Double-Dactyl!!!

Klassy Lassy
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25 posted 06-29-2009 07:33 PM

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I'm just a visitor
rhyming inquisitor
smiling at rainbows
and feet

Flashing in stripes
pulsing delight
little heart kisses
that beat

A tom-tom surprise
for Alison's eyes
Balladeer's message
complete

LOL! That was cute. I doubt I did the exercise right, though. ~KL

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26 posted 06-30-2009 12:03 AM

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That's good, Lassy! You didn't follow the form in the last lines but everything else was right on....nice to see you here!

Alison

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

27 posted 06-30-2009 01:19 AM

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You got me laughing .. I love this.

A

rachaelfuchsberger
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28 posted 06-30-2009 01:28 PM

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Thanks to the encouragement of the good Sir Balladeer, I have answered my own question. Dactyl:
A metrical foot of three syllables, one long (or stressed) followed by two short (or unstressed), as in happily. The dactyl is the reverse of the anapest.

Arana Darkwolf

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29 posted 08-13-2009 10:25 AM

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Well, leave it up to this 'fallen angel' to come up with a naughty double-dactyl. Hmm,I suppose that the sexy-sounding terms "double-dactyl" and "higgledy piggledy" put me in a naughty frame of mind!

Pleasure Seekers

Tinctures and potions can
Heighten one�s pleasure so
Passionate lovers seek
My special brew.

Doling out favours for
My special clients can
Satisfy me and I�m
Sure it will you!

LLD

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30 posted 08-13-2009 12:41 PM

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Hickeldy-piggledy
Kittenish Valerie�s
Silicone surgery
Set me on fire;

Coveting sodomy
Anaprhodisiacally
Her own erection would
Quench my desire.

Earth Angel
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31 posted 08-17-2009 10:15 PM

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MA ~

Mine might have been naughty but your's makes mind sound rather demure! lol

All times are ET (US)


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