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It's a Bird! It's a Plane! It's a Double-Dactyl!!!

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Klassy Lassy
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25 posted 06-29-2009 07:33 PM       View Profile for Klassy Lassy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Klassy Lassy

I'm just a visitor
rhyming inquisitor
smiling at rainbows
and feet

Flashing in stripes
pulsing delight
little heart kisses
that beat

A tom-tom surprise
for Alison's eyes
Balladeer's message
complete


LOL! That was cute.  I doubt I did the exercise right, though.  ~KL
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26 posted 06-30-2009 12:03 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

That's good, Lassy! You didn't follow the form in the last lines but everything else was right on....nice to see you here!
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27 posted 06-30-2009 01:19 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

You got me laughing .. I love this.

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28 posted 06-30-2009 01:28 PM       View Profile for rachaelfuchsberger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rachaelfuchsberger

Thanks to the encouragement of the good Sir Balladeer, I have answered my own question. Dactyl:
A metrical foot of three syllables, one long (or stressed) followed by two short (or unstressed), as in happily. The dactyl is the reverse of the anapest.

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29 posted 08-13-2009 10:25 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Well, leave it up to this 'fallen angel' to come up with a naughty double-dactyl. Hmm,I suppose that the sexy-sounding terms "double-dactyl" and "higgledy piggledy" put me in a naughty frame of mind!


Pleasure Seekers

Tinctures and potions can
Heighten oneís pleasure so
Passionate lovers seek
My special brew.

Doling out favours for
My special clients can
Satisfy me and Iím
Sure it will you!

LLD  
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30 posted 08-13-2009 12:41 PM       View Profile for Marc-Andre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marc-Andre

Hickeldy-piggledy
Kittenish Valerieís
Silicone surgery
Set me on fire;

Coveting sodomy
Anaprhodisiacally
Her own erection would
Quench my desire.
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31 posted 08-17-2009 10:15 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

MA ~

Mine might have been naughty but your's makes mind sound rather demure! lol
 
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