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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Okay, so I completely blew the "simile" assignment (cough, cough, excuse me, feathers in my throat). Maybe a "two-fer" will put me back in good standing ( and hopefully I'll get it right this time )? With sloth-like speed his mind reacts fact is its prob'ly not that fast last time the crazy thing got used confusions' flag flew from the mast as temperate as a raging bull full steam ahead he jumps the tracks back to this thing called "simile" we simply must address the facts act like the owl in that you're wise disguise a rather simple truth youth is no match for expertise see, poetry's no fools pursuit Shoot blindly as a lazer sight right that which you at first did wrong strong words from one who just ate crow so, "two-fer "is the Doc's new song 'long Similes & Last & First were not so easily rehearsed Doc [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (07-12-2008 11:25 AM).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Brilliantly done, moose.You get a smilie for your simile  Now, if you can convince me that fast and place in the first stanza rhymes, you're outta the dog house...  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Balladeer, I'll go you one better and fix it, plus the one in the last stanza you missed. Doc P.S., does this mean you're not going to revoke my poetic license ? |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
didn't miss it...I was just being kind, trying not to be too nitpicky  Your poetic licence is still valid. I realize that it's a learner's permit..  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Balladeer, Ow! Now I think you're enjoying this a little too much, lol. Doc |
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