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Well, you guys and gals have been busy. You have all done well....almost.

Rose, your second line of the first one has only two syllables.

Rachel...no fudging, please. "My poetry, it..." is fudging.
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Mental note..."it" is a fudge word.

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yep...it's a fudge word when next to the object it represents. So are other words like "my brother, he comes tomorrow" or "the bird, she sings so sweet"

Fudging!!! (unless you're Speedy Gonzales!)
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Ok Balladeer! I fixed it, I hope.

Remembering you
Causes pain
Deep inside this heart


A gentle soul
Can sooth a broken heart
With kind words
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Re-posting because I think I got ignored.....

1.
A trip to the store
school supplies
a new beginning

2.
looking over schedules
trying to find classes
school starts now

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Atta girl, Rose! Now it works..

Rileigh, #1 is good....#2 is not. Re-check it ,please
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Ok, it's late, so I'll probably mess it up.

Lune 1

Even a Dutchie
is able
to count syllables


Lune 2

Sometimes love lingers
in sweet memories of happiness
fulfilling the heart




Like scattered leaves...my words will flow
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No mess up there, dutchie...you done good!
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Ok, thanks Deer, I'll try to attend class more often, but I'm still very busy with the sheep inspections and all.

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

 
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