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0 posted 2008-06-06 03:42 AM

Roses’ Delight

Budding blossoms beckon the sun,
innocent infants of spring.
Fragrance flirts among freshened leaves,
wild rose nestled in green.

Colors create clash of chaos,
mesmerize, melding of hues.
Passionate pink petal parade,
buds will become flowers soon.

Celebrate seasonal wonders!
Dance among the dawn’s new light;
bask in beautiful, bright sun days.
Revel in roses’ delight.

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1 posted 2008-06-06 09:16 AM

Very, very beautiful, Alison. My favorites line? innocent infants of spring.

You even stuck in a little assonance there. That's great when the two work well together.

Ok, then. Time to move on with Moose.

Ya done good!
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