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Munda
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0 posted 2008-05-06 04:23 PM



A sonnet's made of syllables that swing,
Awaiting for the poet's harmony;
The rhyme and rhythm tools to make them sing,
And guide the notes into a symphony.

A sonneteer creates illusions strong;
With solemn inspiration he'll compose;
His pen will always write the perfect song:
A virtuoso rhyme to bring repose  
  
His words a painting of poetic art,
They sing the purest song in firmament,
Alight the darkest spot within a heart,
And find the words that lure beyond lament.

To craft the magic words of sonneteers,
I need more lessons from our Balladeer.



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Nan
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1 posted 2008-05-06 06:37 PM


You do pretty well on your own recognizance, Munda..


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2 posted 2008-05-06 09:38 PM


Well, you certainly need no lessons in iambic, Munda. This one is flawless. Move along to anapestic, please
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3 posted 2008-05-07 02:06 AM




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