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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
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Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2004-07-20 04:41 PM


Yo! By Royal proclamation for the whole month of July,
for your further education, we will make the spitballs fly!
Please make welcome Miss Behavin', if it please the Royal court,
spit those wads that we've been savin' and we'll have a little sport!

Phfft and Phew, two wads go flyin', Miss Behavin' have a care,
'less those tiny bits of paper, they should catch you unaware.
OOPS!,too late, one splats your forehead while another whaps your chin,
His Magnificence has scored a double whammy, c'mon in!

Over here is "endlessecho" who's obtained a Royal slot,
using onomatopoeia, her projectiles they go,"ZOT!"
When they hit their mark precisely, just as pretty as you please,
sticking little bits of paper as you curtsy to both knees!

Over there is "Not A Poet" our advisor to the throne,
you should duck because I fear those were not welcome kisses blown,
with a couple/three "patooies" a barrage flies through the air,
'less you quickly hang a louie, they're about to hit you square...

in your onomatopoeia with a quite resounding SPLAT!
Your befuddled ruler Moose, Magnificent, and all of that.


[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (07-20-2004 09:38 PM).]

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kayjay
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since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015
Oregon
1 posted 2005-01-06 01:11 PM


I've not been back to the workshop for a while and I see what I've missed.  Well done on the solid meter here, and trochaic octameter yet!

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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