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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
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Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2003-11-05 05:47 PM


Not so funny this may be
but it sure seemed so to me
so, ixnay, no words will dice
as I stutter out a villanelle eh, Ice.

I been rappin' with my crew
we layed down a track or two
yeah, that's right, I'll say it twice
and keep spoutin' out this villanelle eh, Ice?

I be doin' it for sport
cuz that form's a nasty sort
I'd much rather get head lice.
Are you sure you want a villanelle, eh Ice?

I hope Ice don't take offense
but I know I'm way too dense
and so against my own advice
guess I'll have to try a villanelle, eh Ice?


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ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
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1 posted 2003-11-06 08:17 AM


OMG, Doc, this is funny, love it...:-)
lmao big time...you sure you are not Dr.Dre in disguise? Yes, I would like to see some villinelle posted here, what say you, eh, says ice?


Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
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Bewilderment , USA
2 posted 2003-11-06 05:27 PM


ice,
Ok, I'm all for it, as long as we can locate "Teach" and get her approval. Yo' Teach! Do you be hearin' us?
Doc

Nan
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3 posted 2003-11-07 07:37 AM


Eh?  Teacher's lost?  I bet SHE knows where she is... Villanelle is fine by me... and Doc Moose always has a great offering...
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