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kayjay
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0 posted 2003-04-18 11:56 AM


All I read is chic.
Challengingly I
Reach for clever wit;
Opting Erato's
Sufferance, but no.
Too hard, I mutter.
I've no work ethic.
Can I buy an A?



© Copyright 2003 Ken Julkowski - All Rights Reserved
Bridget Shenachie
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1 posted 2003-04-18 11:59 AM


This is too good!  Save your money.  I think that you just EARNED your 'A'.

Shenachie

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2 posted 2003-04-18 12:56 PM


   well done

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

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3 posted 2003-04-18 04:03 PM


KayJay~
As the teach would say (if she was here) ....
KEWL~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2003-04-19 09:29 AM


Love this Ken...excellent!
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5 posted 2003-04-20 07:33 AM


You did this very well.
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6 posted 2003-04-21 04:00 PM


Ken,
I'd say you aced this one. It would take a full house to beat this pair.
Doc

Nan
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7 posted 2003-05-01 09:38 AM


Assonance
Is
Never
Outdated
Tautology
For
Outstanding
Rhyming
Syllables
Assuredly
Lend
Enlightenment


kayjay
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8 posted 2003-05-01 10:59 AM


Thank you, Nan, for your ever quick wit in your response.  
As to my thoughts on a May challenge, I offer Beltane, as defined from www.merriam-webster.com)See below) (my daily first peek at a web site..yes, even before pip).  If acrostic are not used up by now, I would offer an acoustic sonnet, that is BBEELLTTAANNEE, which must be in meter and foot, the choice of both up to the author? Another option is a May sonnet without rhyme, but each couplet maintains assonance?  Hope these at least give you a chuckle or headache...your choice.  Ken  
The Word of the Day for May 1 is:

Beltane • \BEL-tayn\  • noun
: the Celtic May Day festival

Example sentence:
Aunt Kat vividly described the huge bonfires and colorful rituals she had witnessed at the Beltane festival in Edinburgh as a girl.

Did you know?
To the ancient Celts, May Day was a critical time when the boundaries between the human and supernatural worlds were removed and people needed to take special measures to protect themselves against enchantments. The Beltane fire festival originated in a spring ritual in which cattle were herded between two huge bonfires to protect them from evil and disease. Perhaps the earliest mention of Beltane (then spelled "belltaine") appears in an Old Irish dictionary commonly attributed to Cormac, a king and bishop who lived in Cashel, Ireland, toward the end of the first millennium. The "Beltane" spelling entered English in the 15th century by way of Scottish Gaelic.

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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