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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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drum the sounds of life aloud receiving with smiles, each stranger understand the beat of impromptu masking surprise by even seam there is so much rhythm around that hearts will seem to be happiness rich every sound would wish to simply be sing lyrics, if you wish, in soft whispers or hum the sounds in alto unless rhapsody prefers a silent you nurture the feelings in your linen dance with the spirit of wind and swim the unknown waters once or twice you might hurt your ego for there would be times when the beats are off life will sometimes rock and other times roll it follows neither a rule nor an alibi for it moves like a breeze kissing a leaf evoking many a sweet response and while the sounds rule the arena let the music play and the drum roll over and beyond the hills may they go united with your spirit when you drum the sounds of life aloud |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
WOWWWWWWWW... This is fantastic... Smiles2uPoetFriendSudhir *~coco~* |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Okay, sir~ Head to the HEAD of the class ! WONDERFUL ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you both very much, Coco and Marge...  Regards, Sudhir |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just wonderful. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh dear and I was so full of energy to make one LOL Sudhir, you're getting an A+ Marge, make room, I'm heading for the sandbox. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot SmartChick and Titia Much appreciated... Regards, sudhir |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sudhir, "Drum the sounds of life aloud"! This is fantastic! Thanks for this one! Doc |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you so very much... regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (04-14-2003 05:09 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You went way beyond the top of the class with this classy piece, Sudhir. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Wow! Don't look now, but your talent is showing. Great write! Shenachie |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you very very much, my kind friends... regards sudhir |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ahh Sudhir, this was a pleasure to read my friend Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot Titia, my friend Regards, Sudhir |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is wonderful, Sudhir... You've taken your acrostic and drum rolled it right around in a circle. I enjoyed it thoroughly - Very kewl indeed...  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Oh... thanks so much dear teacher and dear friend... regards, sudhir |
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