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Paul Wilson
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0 posted 2003-02-19 01:48 AM


Cinquain
“ Workout “
By Paul Wilson


Workout
Getting in shape
Running a marathon
Dedication is what it takes
Sweating




"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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1 posted 2003-02-19 09:19 AM



That, Sir
qualifies well
a cinquain in motion
efforts of the mind and body
as one

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2 posted 2003-02-19 05:46 PM


Well done:
Strong central theme,
movement, feeling and growth,
powerful finish. You're off and
running!



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3 posted 2003-03-01 01:48 PM


Shape up
Exercising
Mind and body in tune
Yields a far healthier life style
Step up

Paul Wilson
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4 posted 2003-03-01 07:19 PM


Nan~ Thanks for the " Cinquain " reply...Paul

Thank you
For all you do
Un-selflishly giving
Of your time and experience
Grateful


"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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