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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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Summer Hot and sweaty Dried up grass and tree leaves Feeling the heat beaming down too Warming 2-8-03 |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Simple! Look for drama Sprinkle in some movement, Show us your emotion -- TA-DA! Cinquain! Sorry, been talking in cinquain here for a couple days, just toying with it...... Seems to me this is a good start in the form (better than my own, which is safely buried in what used to be wadded-up paper in a retired landfill somewhere.....)and as you become more comfortable with it you'll find it as useful as haiku for short poetry. Haiku for meditation, cinquain for drama. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I could use some of that warming sun right now, Sue... Send some my way please?... Your cinquain seems to fit the criteria, so I'd say you've got yourself on the way to success here...  |
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