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Martie
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0 posted 2003-02-07 08:09 PM


I wrote this using an old poem of mine.

She stood
watching the hill
sniffing the burning sage
her fur ruffled by hot dry wind
alone

shadows
cast by night’s moon
touching a strand of trees
a song that was coyote born
in dark

searching
for shade or glade
there is nowhere to hide
waving water has been licked dry
no rain

© Copyright 2003 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
Dr.Moose1
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1 posted 2003-02-07 08:45 PM


Martie,
While I hold no "official" standing here, I'm sure you could join any class you want,(and out-class most of us in the process).
Yip,yip,ahw-OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...
Doc

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2 posted 2003-02-07 09:09 PM


Hi, Martie! Like I said, your gift for imagery lends itself beautifully to this kind of poem.

I'm glad you're here.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-02-13 06:31 AM



Join the class?  What TOOK you so long!?

Nan
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4 posted 2003-02-27 08:41 AM


Knock Knock

Who's there?
Imagining
The best of Martiword
Gracing our walls of poetry
Come in

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