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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-10-31 10:38 AM



Tricky Treaters
~*Marge Tindal*~

Crescent moon waxing
October witch on the fly
Ghostly goblins screech
Give me a really good TREAT
Or TRICKster I shall become~




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Tammy Blessing
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1 posted 2002-11-01 10:08 AM




Wonderful image
What a great Halloween treat!
Rendered in tanka
It's quite a "trick", quite a feat!
Happy Halloween to you!!

Tammy



Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2002-11-01 11:12 AM


Thank you, Tammy~
It was a 'Happy'~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Nan
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3 posted 2002-11-11 06:51 PM


Ghosts and goblins flew
We all went Trick or Treating
Fun was had by all
Then off with those costumes and
On to November's Nuance

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4 posted 2002-11-11 08:18 PM


That was nice. Didn't get to read it untill now, yet I still enjoyed

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

Bridget Shenachie
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5 posted 2002-11-13 10:11 PM


Hi Marge!

I've been out with a sick computer and it made my response really tardy.  I enjoyed your Halloween tanka.  Now I had better get caught up with the terza rimas.  Can't wait to see yours.

Your tankas were just the best!

Shenachie

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