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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA 
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Tanka and Choka Tanka very much I’ll tanka til I choka Tinking in tanka Responding in more tankas And then I’ll choka some more. Shenachie |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ah there you are dear I'm laughing my head of now Let's tanka dance here Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (10-07-2002 07:03 PM).] |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Bridget, this is just too funny!! I'd like to try to choka your tanka here. So here goes.. Yours>>> Tanka very much I’ll tanka til I choka Tinking in tanka Responding in more tankas And then I’ll choka some more. Mine>>> Choking on tanka I cannot stop the laughter While taking a drink Water spurting out my mouth The classroom is getting wet |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh Tammy Blessing You got the classroom all wet Teach Nan will choka Unless you bring her apples We always bribe her with fruits  Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bridget Tanka very much I’ll tanka til I choka Tinking in tanka Responding in more tankas And then I’ll choka some more. Tammy Choking on tanka I cannot stop the laughter While taking a drink Water spurting out my mouth The classroom is getting wet Titia Oh Tammy Blessing You got the classroom all wet Teach Nan will choka Unless you bring her apples We always bribe her with fruits Sunshine Strawberries, you’ll find Will be my fruit of the day But please promise me You will not choka on them Tanka very, very much [This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-14-2002 09:46 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bridget Senachie~ I like your Tanka muchly So much, that in fact I think I will submit one Long before I 'choka' too~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
No way one can choke Margy dear you tanka good Everyone skipped class Let's have some music and dance I like to dance the tanka Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
What happened to class? Everyone's saying Tanka, But I see Choka All on the playground with Marge. I think I will Choka them. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Class begins again October's almost over! Tanka Choka quick! Titia will begin her dance The rest of us will eat fruit! |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Finish this choka? Titia challenged us to write Tammy spurts water Marge and Sunshine add their bit Nan scolds and we write some more! Shenachie |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well now tell me true did not teacher promise stew? Seems like we are here Tanka, Chok'ing Senryus With a Haiku here and there... |
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