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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2002-10-07 06:25 PM






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Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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Bridget Shenachie
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1 posted 2002-10-07 06:46 PM


Ah, Titia.  Beautiful pictures and beautiful Haiku.

Shenachie

Muys
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2 posted 2002-10-12 12:07 PM


I need one word          ~~~*Beautyful*~~~
Mamma

Tammy Blessing
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3 posted 2002-10-12 03:01 PM


I especially love the visuals with these haikus Tita!! Well done!! And do you think Nan will really forgive me for getting the classroom all wet with just a few apples? Maybe I should send her some "watermelon" too!! hehe..
Tammy

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4 posted 2002-10-15 01:11 PM


You already know ... I LOVE THESE !!
So very, very well done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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NewEnglandlazurlu
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5 posted 2002-10-15 03:58 PM


WOW!!!!

Beautiful, just beautiful.

Hugs, Marti

Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2002-10-15 04:42 PM



Hi friends, thanks for your replies.

I've learned in the meantime (from my privat English teacher) that you refer to the Sun as a he and not a she and 'speaking loud' is not correct either, it should be 'loudly'.

So the last line should be:

He's speaking loudly

That's the charm of having your own English teacher No, I'm not saying who it is, otherwise you all go and use him.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Nan
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7 posted 2002-10-22 09:43 AM


Pure magnificence
Sunset's unearthly vision
Only eyes speak truth

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