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Madame Chipmunk
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0 posted 2002-08-25 10:22 PM


~My Little Alien~

From inside my womb
came hiccups and sneezes and burps
every kick and each move
still turn fresh
in my memory's pain

for months, I wondered who you were
how you'd look

as they placed you
on my newly deflated belly
your fright howled louder than a tempest
in the dark of night

I thought...you must not have liked me
no maternal instinct had I

but it grew quickly...
like ivy on a brick wall
it's tendrils
twining themselves
into the mortar of my soul

oh you adorable little squirm of a worm
with huge questioning dark eyes

your head...shaped like a cylindar
hair standing on end
like a scared alien
plucked unknowing
from another world

your journey too swift and turbulent
pulled from the cramped comfort
of mommy, who nested you safely warm
with her pulsating flesh

with the cruel slap of haste
you were suddenly here
in the glare of this
cold shiny place

and of course...
there were those straange faces
staring at you

its no wonder you cry...
my little alien
~

This poem is dedicated to the loving memory of my firstborn son
Eric Stuart Piercey
August 25, 1969 to July 8, 2000
Today would have been his 33rd birthday
may he rest in eternal peace





Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks


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jbouder
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1 posted 2002-08-26 09:45 PM


Lyra:

This is a very touching poem.  It caused me to reflect upon the birth of my own little boys and think about how they've changed me.  Thank you for sharing your thoughts and evoking my own.

Jim

SmartChick
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2 posted 2002-08-27 11:00 AM


This is a wonderful dedication for your son, Lyra.
Not A Poet
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3 posted 2002-08-27 02:59 PM


Hey Lyra,

I was engrossed in the stresses of being born as seen through the eyes of the mother. But wait! It also told of the stresses of giving birth as seen through the eyes of the newborn. A fascinatingly interwoven tale. Then I got to the dedication and it really got to me. This truly was a beautiful tribute to your son. It must be a hard thing to outlive one's offspring. Thanks for sharing.

Thanks,
Pete

Bridget Shenachie
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4 posted 2002-08-28 05:00 AM


Lyra,

This poem is incredible in it's description of birth and it's a wonderful tribute to your son.  Enjoyed the read and I'm awestruck with the write.

Shenachie

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-08-29 12:13 PM


Thanks so much for your reply, Jim...
Every year, since his death... I have written something for Eric on his birthday and also on the anniversary of the day he died.
This year, my muse seemed to have been on vacation.  I was going to write something about his whole life...and I started with his birth... and then it came to me, that the poem solely about his birth would be much more meaningful on his birthday...
I'm glad that it has given you some cause to reflect on your own children's births.
~ poetic chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-08-29 12:15 PM


Thanks so much for your reply, Sue...
I couldn't even answer these until now because I just had to get away from this poem for a couple of days...
The reminders of his death were just tied too tightly to it... although I did answer the replies to it on Open 22... and I probably should have waited because I had nightmares that night...
~ sad hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-08-29 12:17 PM


Thanks so much, Pete...
Eric died over 2 years ago and I still can't believe that he's not here...
He was my little alien...
~ hugs from crazy chipmunk mother

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-08-29 12:19 PM


Thanks so much, Bridget...
It was really difficult to write this poem...
I had to dig down really deep into my soul to pull these words out.
~ thank you hugs

Lyra

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Dr.Moose1
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9 posted 2002-08-30 06:22 AM


Madame Chipmunk,
My condolences on your loss. I really liked your comparison to aliens. While I never really looked at it that way, I guess we're all alien to this world . Some of us never quite out-grow that feeling.
Doc

Nan
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10 posted 2002-09-01 09:46 AM


Isn't becoming a mother just the most unique of experiences that life could possibly offer?

I think your 'alien' analogy is wonderful... They come to us from another realm - and we proceed to 'humanize' them from that day on...

Having met Victor, I know that Eric was a wonderful person, Lyra - You have been blessed... Hugs..

Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-09-16 09:52 PM


Thanks so much, Doc...
We may start out as aliens... but I think this world adopts all of us as it's own,
soon enough.
~ hugs and grins

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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12 posted 2002-09-16 09:56 PM


Thanks so much, Nan... and what a nice thing to say about Victor....
I'll tell him you said that.
I think that being born into this world probably feels so very strange to newborn babies... and they do look like little aliens when they're first born, don't they?

And yes, becoming a mother is one of the most exhilerating experiences one can have...
Men don't know what they are missing out on...
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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