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Nan
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25 posted 01-11-2004 10:34 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

...Tickle Tickle....
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26 posted 01-12-2004 09:11 AM       View Profile for Endlessecho   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Endlessecho

This is amazing.  whew.. and tiring.
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27 posted 01-28-2004 05:14 PM       View Profile for croyles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for croyles

WELL DONE KIT!!! And all the other people who say "well done" in poetry!

I will put you in my library. Hope you see my poem too in the Poetry #31 forum, its called "The Circle or the Spiral?", and it is my first ever poem, but not any specific type of poem.

"Creativity is more inportant than knowledge." Albert Einstein.

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28 posted 01-29-2004 08:41 AM       View Profile for croyles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for croyles

very nice poem!!! Oh and what is a stressed line? And what are all these meters about? Sorry, couldnt learn that from your poem.
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29 posted 01-29-2004 08:48 AM       View Profile for croyles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for croyles

and what are stressed and unstressed lines?
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30 posted 01-29-2004 03:29 PM       View Profile for Richy   Email Richy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richy


Hi Kit, Iíll have to tell you that, I liked this very much
I also like to write this way, itís almost like a crutch
It helps to keep my feet in line, and hold that certain beat
The only way that I can write, that keeps it clean and neat

I donít know where this beat comes from, Iím only glad itís here
Cause if I didnít have it, things would really get severe
It would be like running out of gas, in my two-seater
Only to find out I didnít put coins in the meter

Thanks so much, and please take care, I hope that all is well
Iím glad Iím not the only one who writes like this, thatís swell
I much enjoyed the way you used da Dum da Dum da Dum
It is always nice to hear, from our own Kit McCallum


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31 posted 01-29-2004 04:05 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I said it before, and I will say it again, "Easy for you to say!" LOL.  You tried, honestly you tried with me, admit it you gave up LOL.  Oh you are just too darn good a da dummer.
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32 posted 01-03-2009 03:04 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Tickle, tickle
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33 posted 01-05-2009 12:31 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

You all talk of feet, I'm confused, can you tell?
I write with a rhythm, but not very well.
Perhaps if I learned "blah-blah-meters" I'd know.
Disapline to make all my poetry flow.

I won't say I haven't created a few.
Poems that can strum on a heartstring or two.
But try to learn meter? My brain gets all numb.
I end up feeling da da dum, da da dumb!

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.

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34 posted 04-09-2010 02:39 PM       View Profile for Bailey   Email Bailey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bailey

This is the most helpful poem!! Thank you!!
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