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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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I didn't get these right the first time, so I redid them a little. Hope they are right, now. I watched her as she left the house She headed towards a wooded pile She was going towards the south I watched her as she left the house Gaurding it as quiet as a mouse She laid there for a little while I watched her as she left the house She headed towards a wooded pile By Sue 5-2-02 "Revised" Spring is just around the corner Time for all the flowers to bloom Roses bushes are quite a thorner Spring is just around the corner Weeping willow trees are mourners All the leaves will turn green soon Spring is just around the corner Time for all the flowers to bloom By Sue 5-2-02 "Revised" |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're getting the hang of the repetitions, Sue... Your poems are lovely... Glad to have you here in the workshop with us... Stay tuned for a little 'lighter' fare this month...  |
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