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Munda
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since 1999-10-08

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The Hague, The Netherlands

0 posted 2002-03-09 08:08 AM

Illuminated by love's sweet embrace,
Within the shelter of an Angel's wings,
Caress of tenderness and loving grace,
Aloft the stars and moon two spirits sing.

Within the shelter of an Angel's wings,
Two melodies entwine to only one.
Aloft the stars and moon two spirits sing,
And watch the moon embracing morning's sun.

Two melodies entwine to only one,
Ethereal awareness stills their cries,
As when the moon embraces morning's sun,
In universal peace all distance dies.

Ethereal awareness stills their cries,
While fantasy turns to reality,
In universal peace all distance dies,
When kindred spirits meet their destiny.

While fantasy turns to reality,
They feel the breath of immortality;
When kindred spirits meet their destiny,
The Universe composes poetry.

They feel the breath of immortality,
Caress of tenderness and loving grace;
The Universe composes poetry,
Illuminated by love's sweet embrace.

Munda

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-03-09 09:16 AM

Note to KRJ...learn from Munda, learn from Munda, learn from Munda....

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

2 posted 2002-03-09 03:28 PM

Ah yes, Munda! Love is eternal! What a beautiful pantoum. You inspire us all.

Shenachie

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2002-03-09 05:38 PM

Munda creates beautiful poetry
Illuminating our Passionate Place...

Wonderful, Munda...

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2002-03-09 05:38 PM

Munda sweet girl, this is just awsome good.

I like pantoums. What amazes me with pantoums is that actually the whole poem comes down in the last four line stanza.

Clever one who thought this all up.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

amigo
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

5 posted 2002-03-09 06:46 PM

Oh...how lovely, Munda....Nan is right, (dah..) you compose beautiful poetry illuminating this place..thank you dear, this is a beauty....

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

6 posted 2002-03-10 04:12 AM

Thank you ladies.

Since I have a serious lack of inspiration lately, I've started rewriting some old stuff I wasn't quite happy with in the first place. Therefore some lines may sound familiar to some you.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-03-13 11:00 PM

Munda~
Always a classy read from you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

8 posted 2002-03-14 05:23 PM

Geesh, thanks Marge.

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

9 posted 2002-03-14 09:12 PM

Munda,
Would the words "exquisitly crafted" ring true to your ears ?
Doc

Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03

Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA

10 posted 2002-03-18 04:09 PM

Hi Munda,

This is really great and such a deep subject too. Well done.

Pete

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

11 posted 2002-03-21 03:39 PM

Doc and Pete,

Although you guys give me far too much credit, it sounds like music to my ears.

Thanks.

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