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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands

0 posted 2002-02-23 10:48 AM




I'm sitting here and want to write
a poem in triolet rhyme
Rhyme and meter must be tight
I'm sitting here and want to write
I'm waiting for my muse's light
But actually I don't have time
I'm sitting here and want to write
a poem in triolet rhyme

I should be on my way right now
visiting Mom and feeding sheep
I know I'm just a stupid cow
I should be on my way right now
devide my time? I don't know how
This promised visit I must keep
I should be on my way right now
visiting Mom and feeding sheep


I must run off or the shops will be closed and I promised to get her some stuff


A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I




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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
1 posted 2002-02-23 06:10 PM


You did this very good Titia. Now if I could just fix mine.
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 2002-02-24 01:49 PM


KEWL...

I really like this - Any excuse NOT to work, eh???

Now, did you switch the order of the last two lines just to give you an excuse for later? So you wouldn't have to work then either?...

And umm... You're a COW???

Giggling here..

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
3 posted 2002-02-24 09:38 PM



Thanks, see....I'm just a stupid cow, in the rush I forgot to put the last line in.

ha ha, plenty of cows around here and some look even more stupid than me.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

amigo
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since 2001-10-12
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the earth school
4 posted 2002-02-25 11:10 AM


This is funny, Titia...& 'stupid cow'...now what is that....
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2002-02-25 08:15 PM



Charming! And Titia? I understand the "cow"!

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