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Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03
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0 posted 2002-01-29 12:40 PM


Apple For Teacher


An apple for the teacher in my hands
And how I wonder what she’ll have to say;
Will she be mad? I hope she understands,
There’s nothing else – it’s all I have today.
I worked so hard to get my homework done
And didn’t play at all or waste my time
At foolish tasks or games, no not a one
But wisely spent my efforts writing rhyme.
I’ll blame it on my little dog named Zach,
The one who always greets me at the door
Exuberant with joy that I came back,
Afraid, I think, I would return no more.
I really did the homework but it’s gone;
He ate the paper it was written on.


© Copyright 2002 Pete Rawlings - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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The Hague, The Netherlands
1 posted 2002-01-29 12:45 PM


Yeah, blaming the dog again? Hehe... but this is great and I loved it.
Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
2 posted 2002-01-29 09:56 PM


This is cute. I've been trying to write a sonnet, but my mind just won't work in iambic pentameter. You seem to have it down pretty good here.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Nan
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3 posted 2002-02-08 01:28 PM


I think Pete's real name is Eddie Haskel... He's sooooooo good at this stuff.. And ALL the grown-ups just LOVE him... Bribery, say you?...

Thanks for the apple, m'friend..

Extra Credit for the one who says he's Not a Poet...

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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4 posted 2002-02-11 06:02 PM


Almost missed this beauty.

I love sonnets, but they're still difficult.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23
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Kansas USA
5 posted 2002-02-13 08:16 PM


Not,

This was fun reading and one of these days, I will attempt a sonnet.  I hope that you had as much enjoyment writing it as your readers enjoyed the reading.  Thanks for sharing.

Shenachie

Not A Poet
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6 posted 2002-02-14 11:20 AM


Ladies, thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. And yes, it was fun to write. But I love to write sonnets anyway.

Thanks,
Pete

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