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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-01-28 09:55 PM


The Chime Of Me
~*Marge Tindal*~

Deep within the rhyme of me
You have touched the chime of me
Noted chords of melody
Tinkle of foreverly~

Breezing through the all of me
Moving with a certainty
That with you I’ll always be
Played in wind song melody~

With the windy touch of you
Emotions are stirred anew
Bringing feelings of brand-new
Playing on the winds of you~

In gentle sway ~ heartstrings play
Chiming of foreverly~



*Back to the Merry-Go-Round ???

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Munda
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1 posted 2002-01-29 12:19 PM


Marge, I actually believe this is -except for line 10 and 13 - written in trochaic meter! (That is... if I understand Balladeer's explanation correctly.) Anyway, I'll leave that to Nan, but wanted to say I love this!
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