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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-11-30 11:29 AM


Encircle Me
~*Marge Tindal*~

For I have wrapped you around
Around the shoulders of my soul
Soul of mating and soul elating
Elating everything I am
Am I loving you more
More than just a friend
Friend you encircle
Encircle and take me in~


*Thank you, Titia~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-11-30 01:04 PM


This is just lovely.
Did I inspire YOU???

HUGS Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Tracey
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2 posted 2001-12-02 01:23 AM


Great poem Marge. What is that style called?

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Nan
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3 posted 2001-12-02 07:50 AM


Titia has a way of bringing out the best in us, doesn't she?

This is beautifully done, Marge - It just sort of wraps around and gives you a poetic hug...

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4 posted 2001-12-02 08:13 AM



I haven't done one of these in forever...and to ditto name, it IS a warm fuzzy!

Munda
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5 posted 2001-12-02 09:37 AM


Marge, what else can I say? This is awesome!
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-12-02 11:41 AM


*Thank you each and everyone~
YES, Titia ... you DID inspire me greatly~

Tracey ... Titia says it's Serpentine~
Kind of neat, huh ?
I love things that wrap around us ..
like *hugs* - *arms* and *love*~

I may have to play with my thoughts again in this style~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

cpalmer
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7 posted 2001-12-03 01:06 PM


Well Marge!  This is really neat...I may have to try one these myself!  My muses are slowly starting to wake from the their long slumber!  Thanks for the inspiration!
Hugs
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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8 posted 2001-12-03 02:23 PM


please take this ring dear
gold encircling your finger
now our hearts are one

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

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9 posted 2001-12-06 01:02 AM


Cindy~
Jump in with both feet, gal~
Splash some ink !
Thank you~

LunaTic~
What a lovely, lovely reply~
Thank you so very much~
Glad you wandered into the workshop~
Good to see you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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