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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-10-21 11:43 AM



Rain In Fall
~*Marge Tindal*~

Patter does the rain in fall
Pittered splatter of liquid matter
Slapping concrete
Puddling~ Puddling~
Plip~ Plop~
Plippity~ Plop~ Plop~
Ballerina's pirouette
wet~ wet~
Tutu twirling
Raindrops swirling
Patter does the rain in fall



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Nan
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1 posted 2001-10-21 02:49 PM


I love it - especially the
quote:

Ballerina's pirouette
wet~ wet~


Right ONomatopoeiAlliterationing


[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 10-21-2001).]

Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-10-21 06:18 PM


What can I say other than WOWOWOWOWOWOW

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3 posted 2001-10-23 10:23 AM


Like it a lot Marge....awesome rainy piece

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4 posted 2001-10-23 01:10 PM


Marge,!
This is awesome...I could hear the rain falling all the way over here!  I need some of that!
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5 posted 2001-10-25 12:04 PM


Hey, you know what? It's raining here right now, and it sounds just like your poem!! Good one Marge

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6 posted 2001-10-26 02:47 AM


This sounds like it reads. Great write Marge!
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