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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding 
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On the starting grid they’re rev, rev, rev, reving up Minds are focused, wheels grip tight, who is gonna win the cup The signal flashes red light, red light, red light...green Vrroom, hear the roar of the engines as they scream Whoosh, lightening fast, see them squealing off the grid First corner, smash, crash, one car just got hit Bang, bounce, thud, another hits the tire wall Radios crackle, static voices, the rescue team is called Screeching tires and the roars of thunder from the crowd F-1 racings fun, but it sure gets pretty loud |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Haven't been to the track in years...loud is an understatement. Here it's mostly Nascar. Still love the speed, and your poem is too Onocarcool. Are you the perfect woman...or what? |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Now Nascar I don't watch, just F1 and CART (though even F1 loses it's excitement when Schumacher keeps winning. I want Coulthard to win dammit!!!) And yes indeed, I am the perfect woman, I love cars, I drive with speed, I drink beer and I tell naughty jokes. What's not to love!!! LOL If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
that was picture perfect o yuh |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
whooohoooo I can hear the motors, love this onomatoofyou a lot! Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 10-21-2001).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
OH yeah - a day at the track - smash, crash, thump, bump... good ones...  |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
This is great! I felt as if I were on the track watching and hearing everything going on! haven't been to a track in a long time...thanks for the memories! Cindi |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This sure brought back memories! Good write Tracey!  |
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