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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-10-09 10:46 AM



OnaMataTreata

~*Marge Tindal*~

With a blip and a buzz
and a plop diddle-diddle
Crazy cats meowing
right in the middle
of the night
Little goblins
squealing delight
As ghosts do howl
while on the prowl
Trick or Treat
Now, ain't that sweet ?





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com            

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 2001-10-09 12:59 PM


Very sweet, you sweet thing
Liz

Munda
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2 posted 2001-10-09 02:35 PM


Way to go Marge! Love it.  
Charisma
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3 posted 2001-10-09 04:05 PM


love it ....love it.....love it....

yep as I already said I love it!

Charisma

Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-10-09 05:13 PM


Well well well and she added some pics too

Great onamatatreata you wrote here.

Munda, Charissma and me, well we do just the Dutch version, you'll see.

Titia

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Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Romy
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5 posted 2001-10-09 05:34 PM


Perfect for Halloween!
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6 posted 2001-10-09 08:30 PM


Marge ,
Spooky , kooky , and quite flukie , can't stop this with a bazookie . You the gal with tales to tell , and you do them very well .
Doc

Nan
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7 posted 2001-10-10 09:42 AM


...BOO...



Hehe... OnomatoBOOeia
Very cute, Marge

Elizabeth
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8 posted 2001-10-10 05:15 PM


BOO!!  

Good onomatopoeia Marge!


God bless America, my home sweet home.

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 10-10-2001).]

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9 posted 2001-10-10 11:28 PM


BOO!!!   UGH!!! whew for a minute there I scared myself!  Marge this is awesome...Teach can I copy her?  She always gets good grades!!!  Liked it!
Hugs
Cindi

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10 posted 2001-10-21 03:54 AM


purrrfect yuh
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2001-10-21 02:21 PM



Cool cats meow
in poetic howl
Lickety-split across the moon
Witches come on whisk of broom~
Gathering Halloween thoughts worthwhile
OnaMataTreata style~

*Thankee, classmates~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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