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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2001-09-13 09:07 PM


Vegas shines for me
Each time that I've been before
Granted in my dreams
( As the class begins to snore
Stoopid Doc's a fwippin' bore! )

Ask , three wishes yield
When Alladin visit soon
All shall be revealed
( I think that this woony-tune
Talks wike a backward baboon !)

Safe trip to and fro'
Fortune if be in the cards
Up-start Fudd not go
( Dweaming he's the fweakin' Bard
Doc's a big fat tub-o-ward !)

Listen up now Fudd
Over there down the left side
Says it all , you dud
( Eww ! you've hurt my pwecious pwide
Soon I'll shoot your fuwwy hide !)

At last I am free
Gambling I could beat this runt
Adios , he-he !
(I'll join in the next Moose hunt
Nobody calls me a wunt ! )



© Copyright 2001 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2001-09-14 07:02 AM


Watch out, Doc.. I think E Fudd is on a MOOSE hunt... Run for your life...


E.Fudd
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since 1999-11-03
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2 posted 2001-09-15 08:34 AM


Hey ! No fair , you scwewwy moose ! My part was wots better . I'm telwing . Oh ,Teacher... Doc's twying to gwab all the cwedit... and he called me a wunt , I'm not a wunt I'm just verticwy chawwenged .

( Looking petulant with arms folded across chest while stamping foot )

Dr.Moose1
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3 posted 2001-09-15 08:37 AM


Sheesh , what a sore loser ! O.K. Fudd ... I hereby acknowledge that the above piece was co-writted with E. Fudd , whose diminutive stature is only exceeded by his writing abilities . There , are you happy now ?
E.Fudd
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4 posted 2001-09-15 08:39 AM


Well... O.K. , but Miss Nan , could you pwease gwade my half sepewatewy ?( I don't want Doc dwagging my mark down .)
Munda
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5 posted 2001-09-15 03:47 PM


Thanks for the smile Doc. I sure needed one. Um... you too Mr. Fudd!

[This message has been edited by Munda (edited 09-15-2001).]

Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2001-09-16 04:32 PM


Went away this weekend and first thing I saw coming back was this.
Smile on my face all the way thru.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Dr.Moose1
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7 posted 2001-09-24 05:22 PM


Nan ,
I'll keep my eyes open , thanks .

Munda ,
Thank you . I gotta admit ,I thought the little guy did a fairly decent job .

Titia ,
Thanks , I'll settle for a little chuckle ,
laughs are hard to come by these days .

Doc

Nan
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8 posted 2001-09-25 08:59 AM


I don't recall approving E Fudd for posting here in this forum, so I do think  he should be on better behavior if he intends to stick around...

E Fudd - Have a little respect for your friend Moose, wouldya?

You did do very well on the assignment, though -- gotta admit..

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