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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-09-09 10:34 AM



Two cats on a couch
fattened by doting keepers
watching the caged bird
who had nothing to fear now
for they wouldn't move at all



A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Nan
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1 posted 2001-09-10 07:56 AM


Kewl... This sort of reminds me of Ron's two cats.. They don't move much either (because they're slippers)

Seriously, I see this whole scenario, with the fattened felines dozing lazily and totally ignoring the caged birdies beside them... at least for the moment, eh?

anonymousfemale
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2 posted 2001-09-10 02:00 PM


This reminds me of a Garfield comic strip.  
I like it. A killer piece. Well done.  

~AF~

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Munda
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3 posted 2001-09-10 03:08 PM


That are most definitely NOT my cats!    Great job you two!
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4 posted 2001-09-10 08:08 PM


KrawDad and Titia~
This is wonderful !

And my birds are chirping a song of relief~
~*Marge*~

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