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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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0 posted 2001-08-20 06:16 PM


Does this count too? or is it a


I
am
wet
rain
pours
softly
in
the
tree
birds
loudly
tweedle
the
rain
keeps
coming
heavily
I
am
wet
more



A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
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Phoenix, Az
1 posted 2001-08-20 11:49 PM


Good Job!   I don't think teach will mind it! I like it...clever thinking!    I'd say you did great!
Hugs
Cindi

Nan
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2 posted 2001-08-21 07:58 AM


Kewl - We've all done our own adaptations on this assignment - there just weren't enough rules, I guess.. LOL..

I really do like this variant, Titia - Great job here..

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-08-23 11:19 AM


Titia~
You keep us on our toes .....
I like this ! !
Delightfully designed !

So
many
rhopalic
exercises
mesmerizing
containing
ideal
awe

*What fun !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-08-24 08:24 PM


Thank you dear friends.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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vlraynes
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5 posted 2001-08-25 06:24 AM



Titia-
   This is wonderful!
   Very creative write, my friend.
   Great job!!

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Allan Riverwood
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6 posted 2001-08-26 12:47 PM


Delightful!  Mind if I try this myself sometime?

You eat the brains of an old, wise man.

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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7 posted 2001-08-26 05:52 PM


Dear Allen, just go ahead, it's fun to do.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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paladin
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8 posted 2001-08-29 11:45 AM


Great "poet tree".Pardon the pun.;D

paladin

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