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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Iambic flow shall not impede this plunge nor shall inherent lack of ending rhyme The content of this piece shall dictate what will float upon this page now set adrift No easy task this current pull is strong to ask for elements to fall in place The stroke of my intentions slips away reflecting more the riffles than the pools Expanding circles out beyond my range their forms become too vast that I might hold As if the hand that writes is of itself an entity complete not part of me Such thoughts perhaps at times may sound absurd yet here and now within crest full and flow |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
"As if the hand that writes is of itself an entity complete not part of me" Exactly how I feel with this assignment! LOL Still working on it though. Again you did a great job Doc and in fluent iambic too! No rhyme... rhyme... how will I survive!  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Munda , Yeah , "Teach" really threw us a curve this time , and then she takes right off galavanting to Florida ! I think there might be another blank verse about that in the works ! Doc |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
LOL... I surely had fun in Florida... and I have to agree with you Doc... I have a really hard time writing without rhyme too... I'm trying though... I really am... I like your work here... Nice job..  |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Beautiful use of blank verse... something I'll never achieve! LOL! Hats off to you, my friend!  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Another perfect one! I think writing these things must be as natural to you as breathing! I love the humor in it too! Debbie |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Nan , I'm really glad you enjoyed yourself . Truly . Now get back to work ! ( just kidding ) . Take a couple years off , I think Munda wants your job here . Or maybe , we could call this " Doc's Demented Workshop " ! Whaddaya think ? Doc |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Lovebug , Self imposed limitations are just that .I don't have any that I'm aware of .Thanks ! Doc Romy , Yes , sometimes this seems as natural as breathing to me , other times , I am sorely reminded of my short-comings . Thanks , just write , it will all fall in to place . Doc [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 05-01-2001).] |
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