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Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

0 posted 2001-03-08 11:32 AM

Rita Book was a very good teacher,
though she lacked even one lovely feature,
but her students were blind,
so admired her mind,
and thought her a beautiful creature.

Edna Sand was terribly shy,
right up til the day that she died
each night she would pine,
for Willy B. Mine,
too timid to speak to the guy.

Ann P. Dextrous, remarkably dandy,
viewed her talent as terribly handy,
while writing a letter,
she knitted a sweater,
and sipped on a blackberry brandy.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-03-08 04:16 PM

Romy.
lol, you did very well with these.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

2 posted 2001-03-08 04:39 PM

Thanks Kethry!
I did some editing, but think number three still needs work. Can't wait to read what other folks have written!
Debbie

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-03-09 12:10 PM

Limericks! What a nice idea.
Fix the rhyme in #2, and the others are fine. (maybe "the day she did die?")
#3 doesn't make much sense, but that is the beauty of limericks!

I am so very tired, I may try a few of these tonight.
Good idea.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

[This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 03-09-2001).]

Dr.Moose1
Member Elite

since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA