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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2001-01-10 06:55 PM


In class on chairs of wood we sit
Some how does not seem fair so I
Am here to raise a stink he says
Who what where when but mostly why , a

Nice big comfy sponge for duff
As though a throne just not will do
Not 'till we clone enough for lo
One cushy chair just is not cool

No one else here has padded can
Like teach up front good grief and so
Our one relief is found in fun
Out of the window my grades go , a

Fool to even hatch this plan
As tres'cool teacher is I know
She's likely to just say ta-ta
It's to the office Moose you goes

There but for grace of Nan go I



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Craig
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1 posted 2001-01-10 08:08 PM


Another fine example of a well thought out poem.

  


Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.


Suzanne Arlene
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2 posted 2001-01-10 10:10 PM


Wonderful poem Dr Moose A joy to read
  



[This message has been edited by Suzanne Arlene (edited 01-10-2001).]

Romy
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3 posted 2001-01-11 08:28 AM


Really cute!  This was fun to read!
LoveBug
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4 posted 2001-01-11 05:30 PM


Hehe... loved this one! Not the best way to suck up to the teacher, though!!!  

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
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Munda
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5 posted 2001-01-12 05:53 PM


LOL I warned you Nan this was going to be worse than the 'Stute!   Great job Doc.
Kethry
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6 posted 2001-01-13 09:14 PM


good job Doc!
you're really good at these, or really foolish in a smart way, I'm not sure which after your choice of subject matter.
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
7 posted 2001-01-29 08:50 PM


HEY MOOSE...  You know you did a really good job here.. and... You know you get graduate credit for it... but... I'm joining the Moose hunt... .. and hanging my chalk from the antlers when I mount them on my wall...
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