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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-01-09 08:18 PM


Acrostic Calendar Of Thoughts
~*Marge Tindal~*


Just a little case oF
Anxiety of this versE
Now I cannot tell A fiB
Unless this becomes youR
Arrangement for a SenyrU
Raising the ante,I say,AhA
Yearning to finish this yeaR
.....................seeMinglY
........................Arriving
.....at a conclusion, foRegone
........................Coming in
........................Heralding
A new song sung on
Precious spring voices
Rumbling with the
Images of Spring's
Laughter.............Merrily
.....................Alluding to
.....................Yearnings of
Joy
Unearthed in
Naked abandon of
Erstwhile pursuits of Jubilant
......................Undertakings
......................Laying
.................merelY
Amongst the
Unique flowerbeds of
Granted wishes
Undeniably
Seeking a special
Touch from handS
...............Epitomizing the
...............Pampering of
...............The
...............Embryo of thought
...............Maturing in the
...............Blending of minds
...............Equalizing the
...............Rationality
Of
Concientious
Thoughts
Orbiting the
Boundries of
Eternity and
Returning to Nest in
.............Ordinary
.............Vagueness of questioned
.............Epistles
.............Marking the vestiges of
.............Belief in
.............Eternal life and
.............Ruminating with
Dedications of
Ethereal
Considerations
Emanating from
Manifestations
Borne on the light of
Eternal truths of the
Return of the Messiah


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Kethry
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1 posted 2001-01-09 11:20 PM


Wow! Acrostics at their very best. Marge, the flow of you pen never ceases to amaze me!
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.


Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2001-01-10 06:32 AM


Marge,
Between you and craig I'm starting to see acrostics everywhere ( Hey! there's one now on my keyboard !)Great read !
Doc

Romy
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3 posted 2001-01-10 07:45 AM


Marge, you've done it again, perfectly!  
Really enjoyed it!  

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2001-01-10 11:26 AM


Boy, I pop in here for a little peek on my day off, and all I can say is WOW! Great work Marge, such creativeness, you are one in a million!  Even beyond the originality of the acrostic formatting, the words themselves flow just beautifully, very much enjoyed this!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2001-01-10 12:22 PM


MARGE, all I can say is this is 'AWESOME'...
Oh what a treat to have seen this...
Thank you for sharing this creative artform with us...
Geeez you are really good PoetLady  

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-01-10 02:19 PM


Kethry~
Thank you.  This one surprised me as well.

Doc~
Keyboard acrostics are contagious, I think.
Glad you enjoyed it.

Debbie~
I did enjoy doing it.
Thank you for reading.

Kit~
I appreciate your comments so much.
Sometimes I think there must be a little reservoir of acrostic muses waiting to accost me.

Dani~
You make me feel like a half-a-million bucks ! !
I thank you so much.
~*Marge*~


*Waiting for the teacher to grade it !


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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7 posted 2001-01-11 05:21 PM


I've enjoyed your amazing talent in describing the months of the year in this piece. I especally love the description of December:

"Dedications of
Ethereal
Considerations
Emanating from
Manifestations
Borne on the light of
Eternal truths of the
Return of the Messiah"

I think this deserves an A+!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



Gene
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8 posted 2001-01-12 03:20 PM


Oh my gosh! That's incredible.

~Gene

Munda
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9 posted 2001-01-12 06:13 PM


No Gene, that's Justin Credible! Very creative Marge... leaving with a sigh...
Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2001-01-12 08:50 PM


LoveBug~
Thank you, sweetie.
I really do like this one too.

UGene~
Thank you very much.

Munda~
I appreciate the sigh !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Nan
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11 posted 2001-01-28 07:54 AM


This is wonderfully creative in content and format, Marge... I'd say that graduate credit is definitely in order... C'est superb!!..
Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2001-02-02 07:44 PM


Thank you, Nan.
I was honestly surprised at how easily it flowed
and can honestly say I enjoyed the mental workout
on the formatting.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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