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Nan
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0 posted 2000-11-05 10:29 AM


If the paradelle wasn't enough for us... Let's take on this one again... Where's the line? Who's in it? Stop throwing spitballs, Doc...

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Munda
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1 posted 2000-11-05 10:40 AM


LOL Nan, are you clairvoyant ? You posted this while I wrote mine ! Hehe...I'm in !!
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-11-05 11:38 AM


I'm looking to work up an appetite ...
Villanelle it is !

Count me in !
~*Marge*~


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vlraynes
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3 posted 2000-11-05 12:55 PM



ME TOO, ME TOO!

I'm here teacher.
I wanna learn how to
write a Villanelle too.

Margie...stop makin' faces at me!  

ok...teach me somethin' teacher.  

-vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Romy
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4 posted 2000-11-05 02:33 PM


Uh...how hard is this?
Suzanne Arlene
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5 posted 2000-11-05 05:07 PM


I'm in I will give it a try .  
Dr.Moose1
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6 posted 2000-11-05 06:02 PM


Sknyxx , sknyxx .. oops sorry Teach , must have dozed off again . Spit-balls , nope not me, unless I was doing it in my sleep . A Villanelle you say ? Now that has a familiar ring to it , lessee , hmmmm , must be one kickin around in here some place .I'll just
have to look under that big ol' dust pile in the corner I think that's where I left 'em .Oh yeah , there they are , count me in !
Doc

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7 posted 2000-11-06 03:58 AM


TEACHER ~
Serenity's playing hookey !
And she's 'posed to dust erasers !

I'll get her in here ...
Let's tell her a Villanelle is a short course in being a carpenter's helper.
She'll come running.


Ahem ... Oh, Serenity ...  
~*Marge*~


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serenity blaze
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8 posted 2000-11-06 08:56 AM


zzzzz..huh? me? I swear I wrote that paradelle....now what did I do with that thing?  sigh.  LOL.  

Okay, I'm here. But no promises this time. Gives me writer's block. Lemme grab some coffee and I'll be right back!

Sven
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9 posted 2000-11-06 07:08 PM


um I don't know about anyone else. . .but I never saw serenity write no Paradelle. . .  

I did. . . I did. . . nyah, nyah. . . lol

But since I'm either masochistic or just plain silly, I'd like to do this one too!!  Can I, oh please can I???  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Elizabeth Cor
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10 posted 2000-11-09 05:42 PM


Uhm. Uhm… My dog ate my homework, and then the bus crashed! Yeah! And then my cat ran away and…
Uhm…*ahem* sorry, I'm late… what's this valliany thing?



Felix
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11 posted 2000-11-14 07:04 PM


Can I play please?!?!?!?!

Did you ever read about a frog who dreamed of being a king, and then became one?

- Neil Diamond


Kethry
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12 posted 2000-11-15 05:07 AM


I wanna play at villain  too mmwwaahhhh..   Like my evil laugh teacher? I ain't sittin next to Doc though he smells funny and snores reaalllly loud. no way, uh huh nope.
Kethry


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Sylvester
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13 posted 2000-11-15 06:59 AM


Who let Felix in here?


Nan
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14 posted 2000-11-15 07:01 AM


Settle Down you guys!!
Kitties - go to your corners..

Kethry
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15 posted 2000-11-16 06:42 AM


*Kethry sits with her hands folded* It's done miss, posted in Open #10. Can I go home now? I have a tummyache in my head. I have an "owie" see

Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
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