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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Twice scattered thought stay not purloined Twice scattered thought stay not purloined Brought forth from whence be now re-joined Brought forth from whence be now re-joined From whence twice scattered thought re-joined stay now brought forth be not purloined Once free to hold most certainly once free to hold most certainly that which you mold will come to me that which you mold will come to me You hold that which most certainly once free to mold will come to me I'll not regret one moment spent I'll not regret one moment spent Freed twice as thus of torment wrent Freed twice as thus of torment wrent Not twice I'll regret moment wrent of torment freed as thus one spent Twice wrent from hold now scattered thought brought forth to mold that which I'll be Freed of regret most certainly Free will thus spent you come to me Stay once as torment not purloined not twice one moment whence re-joined |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
My mouth is hanging open . I don't think i could ever write like that. Wow amazing stuff. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I think writing a paradelle is a great achievement, and you spew them forth like a mountain spring. And they're all so wonderful. My hats off to your great writing Liz |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Suzanne& Liz , Things are not always as they seem .I am fortunate enough to have a job where I can keep running these things through my head for 8 to 10 hours at a time. A little here , a little there . Some-times they will carry over into the next day . Some people might say I need to get a life . They're wrong ,I have one now . Doc |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ACK...the title alone certainly spoke to me...and this form does so elude me to the point of severe jealousy. It's like math---and oh, how do you get math to flow...it does elude me so... Well done doc, and I'm hoping it's there, somewhere, on the back burner...cooking slowly...lol |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm smilin'  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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