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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2001-10-15 06:10 PM


Ouch! buzzing stungmebee
Niggling as I mumble free
Oozing, popping, moan and hiss
Murmur, thudding, croak like this
Ah, the rattlesnake did lisp
To be sizzled cooked to crisp
Oh he shimmied up last week
Pow! Made girlfriend screech, go eek.
Ow! The squish of pus and goo
Every plop and ew P. U.
I’m babbling with a great kaboom
All is bleak: vroom and zoom!




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Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-10-15 07:03 PM


WOW WOW Way out Way out WALT

Well that's the only thing I came up with  

Super

Titia

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Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2001-10-16 06:21 AM


" stungmebees " & speech impaired rattlesnakes . Welcome to Walts' World ( gotta love it !)
Doc

Romy
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3 posted 2001-10-16 08:13 AM


I love it! Great onomatopoetic stungmebee acrostic!
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-10-16 01:20 PM


Walt~
When I get up off the floor -
I will say this is so YOU ~

An acrostic to boot~
TooooooooooFarrrrrrrrrrOutttttttttt~
~*Marge*~


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cpalmer
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5 posted 2001-10-16 01:25 PM


I was laughing so hard I fell off my chair!  Love it love it love it!!!
Cindi

Munda
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6 posted 2001-10-17 12:42 PM


Yeek! Onomatopoeia AND Acrostic? Wowsa!
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7 posted 2001-10-17 09:57 PM


Hehe. I never came to this part of pips 'till today. LOL. And here I used to say "On a mat I pee, yuh!" That's my doggie routine. Now you know, I'm a looney tune.
Tracey
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8 posted 2001-10-17 10:53 PM


Cool. I think you're gonna get a gold star too. I'm just gonna go to the back of the class til I get this figured out!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Duncan
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9 posted 2001-10-17 11:56 PM


Well, I'm impressed.  One of these yokoono things and an acrostic.  Damn!
Nan
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10 posted 2001-10-19 08:53 AM


waytogooutwalty...


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11 posted 2001-10-19 09:10 AM


*WOW* this is soooooooooo wayoutyou


Charisma

wayoutwalt
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12 posted 2001-10-19 12:11 PM


Did I mention I am much obliged for all your replies o yuh
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13 posted 2001-10-21 08:25 AM


THis is the height of onomagoo. You win the prize for poetic license and poetic humor.
Great job
Liz

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