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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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Hey folks - Here are some of the poems written this month by my seventh graders.... What do you think????? |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
Winter blows cockin balls and Fall to the ground and i hate Ms. Ness falls out The dancing leaves change to snow and come crashing down The rippling waves turn to ice and Jack frost does his work Where rain once was hail now is Winter has come and Fall has left By Johannes [This message has been edited by Class (edited 12-23-1999).] |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
As I close my eyes , I hear seagles over head and waves crashing agenst the rocks . When I open my eyes and look at the black velvet , with white sparkles , I think how beautiful things can be . created by , Grace |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
The fifty stars must stand for something Along with those stripes Maybe it stands for justice Maybe it stands for rights Maybe the red, white, and blue a grazing In the wind tells us are freedom is now ringing The beauty of the flag I think I know......... Must stand for America and it's people created by, Shannon G [This message has been edited by Class (edited 12-21-1999).] |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
The monkey is grey the monkey turned turqoise OH NO a giant banana peel the monkey is red it just turned green Man, what a messed up monkey By Andrew Jordan [This message has been edited by Class (edited 12-21-1999).] |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
BOYS Boys are not everything they just like to flirt but when you go out with them they treat you like dirt.... He says he loves you and then you beleive him but when he breaks up with you, you dont want to leave him..... He says your the only one and then you trust but when he goes out he leaves you in the dust..... You cant beleive he is gone you dont know what to do your wishing on a star that he is thinking of you..... He calls you on the phone and you get so excited cause you dont know what to do but what he has to say is that he LOVES YOU!!!!! Jenna |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
WINTER Winer is colb, winter is fresh, winter is refreshing nevertheless, when ever you need a little winter in your life, go to the North Poll and live Satinz life, The snow is wite, the snow is pure, the snow is for the winters' assure, winter is cold, winter is fresh, winter is refreshing nevertheless, WINTER. -Elizabeth hamilton- [This message has been edited by Class (edited 12-23-1999).] |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
Christmas time is near, St. Nick will soon be hear. He'll land upon your snowy roof, Raindear willleave proof. He'll slide down your chimney, Leave preasants and say jimmany. And up he will go, Out into the snow. Delivering gifts, from each ones lists. When St. Nick is all done, And had his Christmas fun. He'll hop upon his sleigh, And be off on his way. Come holiday time next year, St. Nick and his elves will chear. Christmas again bringing joy, To every girl and boy. by Jaime |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
I bought this shirt for with a collar for just one dollar no wonder it was for a dollar the buttons aren't sown but stapled the sleeves are really uneven I ask for my money back but instead they gave me a slap ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Christmas is almost near the children lagh and cheer everyone has so much fun the parents are near done no can wait to open the gifts no one will miss this momment the girls all want dresses and the boys all want glasses Dominique |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
Ice Crystals hang from the end of you roofs They crystal when light hits them When they fall they make a pretty sound When summer comes they melt to crystal water Created by Ashley |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
Dark clouds start comming comming, comming Your face turns redder redder, redder Lightning starts flashing flashing, flashing As you yell yell, yell Thunder thuds thud, thud created by, Shannon G [This message has been edited by Class (edited 12-21-1999).] |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
As I looked outside the leaves are falling The weed still gives me a buzz and the strong men that i love haunt me wind As i stepped outside I got a boner Rememberance of it snowing sliding down a bum Winter sucked by now it is really gay The trees with it's new leaves it brings Schools close to an end now it is may Now the day is ending lets go in and stay There's two more season's but I can't stay As the homeless dreaming...dreaming away Remember this poem and wait and see A brand new poet waiting to be --John garlin Jr-- [This message has been edited by Class (edited 12-23-1999).] |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
There once was a seagull that ate a begal The begal was regal therfor it was a regal begal It cried and yelled for help But al that came down was kelp And we all felt bad for that old seagull By Johannes and Spencer |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
Ben Jenner The grass was green upon the land The sun was laying low The wind was strong the leaves began to blow In no time the leaves were blown away The wind made the branchs sway The sunshinerays were gleaming off the pool Even though it was the end of the day It was warm when I got out |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
I bought this shirt for with a collar for just one dollar no wonder it was for a dollar the buttons aren't sown but stapled the sleeves are really uneven I ask for my money back but instead they gave me a slap ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Christmas is almost near the children lagh and cheer everyone has so much fun the parents are near done no can wait to open the gifts no one will miss this momment the girls all want dresses and the boys all want glasses Dominique |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
Mothers ways When they hug you, you know they love you When they kiss you, you know they will always be there They don't need to tell you, you can feel it inside Your mother will be there through good and bad sides created by, Shannon G |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
The Alaskan Plain The Alaskan plain was cloudy, damp, and cold. The fields have green grass. The streams were rocky and lowly. Brown bears eat the grass. Trout slowly was away. The late ducks stay near the willow bed. The rocky mountains create blustery snow. The moose expire near the stream. The raven watches over the forest and the Alaskan plain. -Eric Beers |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
Mothers ways "Home is where you heart is" Where your family is Where your joy is Home is a place for happiness For love For caring Home is for sharing For sharing coffee For sharing hugs Home is for you and your family to get to know each other better "Home is where your heart is" created by, Shannon G |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
A POEM IS... A poem is something you write When you are happy and bright. A poem is some words That express your feelings Happy or sad. A poem is your thoughts, your feelings, your dreams. A poem is... ~Crystal Teixeira~ |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Wow! What talents I see here! I was quite surprised, but pleasantly so. You all are wonderful! Keep it up! "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Sylvester Junior Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 16 |
Hey, these are really excellent. You guys are in the seventh grade? This is great work..  |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Wow These are all great. I see future Poets and Writers. What a neat class to have! Jenny Lee Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
These are all wonderful ! What a talent ! |
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