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jbouder
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since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534
Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash

0 posted 1999-12-08 01:55 PM


Poor old Jim only wanted some fun
When he ate beans and dogs by the ton.
But to his grand dismay
He discovered that day
Why two colons are better than one.  


***

Dedicated to Nan for her patience with such an obstreperous student such as myself.  


 Jim

"If I rest, I rust." -Martin Luther



© Copyright 1999 Jim Bouder - All Rights Reserved
Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
1 posted 1999-12-08 03:30 PM


LOL  ahem!..*picking self up off floor from laughing, and dusting jeans off*



 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
2 posted 1999-12-13 06:56 PM


A very good one Jim ! You even got the meter right this time ; ), though I liked the other ones too. : ) Now, let's see if I can pass the test. Yikes !
Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 1999-12-14 08:45 PM


Two Colons are better than one is..
Much better than counting on none is
If one is worn out
The other can spout
While sitting and reading the funnies..

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-12-15 10:17 PM


ROFL
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