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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Flip, flap, flop go my folders raging red, mellow yellow, purring white since following a few simple directions I read with chirping cricket through the night Note: I feel like I am a first grader but since you all seem so nice (and I heard something about necking on the playground), I’m giving it a try. It’s short…but that’s how I write. Just let me know if I’ve got the general idea, ok? Moose, I got your back. We’ll just stand in a corner and smoke and look real cool if the girls gang up on us. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Flip, flap, flop folders moving up at top chukling, giggling over here when maps of red and white appear yep I like the way you write but not those chirping crickets at night  like it, even if I can't say if this is close to the general idea, I leave that up to Mz. Nanny ......... asIamonlyasimpleclassmatehere  Charisma |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
 Good for you Duncan, glad you stayed on. I'll join you in the corner at the playground to smoke cigarette along with Doc  Since I'm a Dutchie, don't know anything about onowhatevermore, but I LIKE YOURS Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I really think you're getting the hang of this. Way to go Duncan! Perhaps I shall try another one too... perhaps I said!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ Were you sandbagging ??? You got the onomatogeneraloto idea for sure ~ Psssst, in the corner of the playground, by the Oak tree~  ~*Marge*~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Duncan , Flick , sssss , puff , puff , ahh ! I do believe you got the hang of it ! Thanks fer coverin' me back boyo ! Doc |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
its a good accomplished read! O yuh even |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
yes, great second try! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Hey, ya done good Duncan. And I won't be ganging up on you...I was always one of the girls smoking with the boys in the parking lot (and don't ask me what I was smoking. lol) If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yep - That's the idea...  |
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