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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap 
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Gentle breeze whispers -- Moon's face dances on the pond When Night breathes her sigh. ------------------ You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
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Skyfyre, this is absolutely beautiful! I love it! ------------------ Denise |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
This is very pretty, Skyfire. Your word choice (with "s", "th", "z" sounds and "sigh" at the end), I think, compliments your theme well. Very nice job. ------------------ Jim "If I rest, I rust." -Martin Luther |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Very well done. I had to read this a few times to try and find the "hidden message" but I got there. (it isn't on your account..it is that I am tired and couldn't look deeper right now..lol) |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Twilight's skyfyre burns Day's remnants foregone wood be Tomorrow's kindling ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 5-7-5 about nature - personification - great message - It certainly works for me... [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 11-27-1999).] |
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