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StarPryncess17
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0 posted 06-10-2000 10:19 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17


Saying Good-Bye  

Trying to keep myself busy
I wonder-do you even miss me?
You broke my heart-do you even care?
Please some back my little Teddy Bear
My heart is empty and my sould is cold
When I first met you I htought you had broken the mold
All you do is sit and loaugh at my sorrow
My heart was all that you wanted to borrow
You dragged it through the mud then took it and ran
I was foolish to actually think you were a real man
You slept with me? Funny, I don't remember that
You lied and all you have now is your stupid cat
I've decided to move on my dear
I'll shed just one more tear
Don't tell mme that you love me that's not what I want to hear
I'm taking my heart back, getting the hell out of here
You thought you could play with my heart
You planned it from the very start
But I figured it out your petty stupid game
Guess, you'll just always be the same
Get over yourself you ignorant little fool
You took my heart and broke every rule
I'm getting on with my life
You were the cause of all my strife
So how does it feel to be all alone?
Don't be calling me on the phone
I blocked your number, you can't get through
How do you feel now? Are you cold and blue?
I hope you are, I hope you feel the way I did
My broken heart and I always hid
Hid behind a mask of smiles and pride
But inside I really already died
See, look I'm so over you
My revenge is way past due
I can't keep it in any more
It was locked deep down inside my core
Burning desires deep within
It definately had to be a sin
You changed my world in more ways than one
For a wonderful while I was your "sweetie" and your "hun"
But now I'm nothing because you think I'm dumb
Now, with your stupid childish games I am done
I'm writing this to finally for one last time say good-bye
On last thing before I go--please don't make any more girls cry

~*~Dedicated to moving on with my life and getting rid of a fool that I thought I loved~*~



 "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves."
"Bleeding hearts release tears of fire"
"work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last"
© Copyright 2000 Jessica Lynn - All Rights Reserved
Jeremy Halstead
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1 posted 06-11-2000 04:53 AM       View Profile for Jeremy Halstead   Email Jeremy Halstead   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremy Halstead

Jess,
Now that I finally got to read the poem...I think it's the best one of your's I've heard yet.  Chat with ya later, hun....

Jeremy

 
amazon_lover
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2 posted 06-11-2000 11:26 AM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Star
I guess we're always looking for something elusive...trying hard to make one believe..when mockery of feelings is on stark display...don't try hard..if its there it's meant to be otherwise just let it go..never cry be bold...you'll find yours.

Sincerely
A_L
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3 posted 06-11-2000 02:08 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

you are a very strong person...good for ya
maybe you could tell me how you do it  
this is a really lovely poem, a little spell check might help, but i agree that this is the best one so far.
looking forward to reading more of your poems
thanks for sharing them
CLBinLOVE
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4 posted 06-11-2000 03:34 PM       View Profile for CLBinLOVE   Email CLBinLOVE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CLBinLOVE

ive been reading alot of posts and replies going on between StarPrincess and ur friend (forgot screenname) and im real sorry that that sleezy guy (chris i think his name was) cought you in his stupid game, but i hope you dont hold a grudge aginst all guys, bcuz ive heard of people who get hurt like that and they never recover, the never trust, never love, never get close to anyone again, i just want to say that even though some guys can be totan A$$es, we arent all that bad!
hehe
StarPryncess17
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5 posted 06-11-2000 08:05 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

Hey you guys! thanks for your replies!!!

Jeremy~sorry that it took so much work! LOL. thxs for making me feel better~ Love ya lots!

A_L~thxs for your advice!  

Acire~ well thanks,but I beg to differ. I'm not as strong as I would like to think!   Had I been I would've been able to resist the urge to incessantly come back to him. but I'm doing my best now...

CLB~ what can I say? you made me feel a lot better about the male population. LoL. hey you wanna marry me? J/K!!! thxs for the kind words and inspiration!

Love you all!! Love Always~*~Jess~*~

oh and p.s. sorry about the spelling! It was pretty difficult trying to type and keep my four year old brother on task. lol. hope you all forgive me.


 "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves."
"Bleeding hearts release tears of fire"
"work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last"
Crystalina123
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6 posted 06-15-2000 02:44 PM       View Profile for Crystalina123   Email Crystalina123   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystalina123

Jess,
I relate well to this poem and it reminds me alot of myself. Question is, (hopefully this won't offend you) if you're so over him then why do you write poems about him?
Anywho, I really like this poem.

Crystal

 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.
Erin
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7 posted 06-16-2000 01:18 AM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

that is one of the best poems that i have ever read. i give you mad props for that. i know exactly how you feel. i fell in love with a guy for what to get played like a fool. all i did was cry but then the emotions changed. i gave up the fact that he lost something that was good. but for me it was good while it lasted and its over now.
Artic Wind
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8 posted 11-15-2007 07:27 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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