Hilton Head, SC, USA
now i know ive felt the way this poem does before, its like the one person you love is either in a bad mood or had something going on in their lives or theyre mad at you, but theres nothing you can do about it but say i love you and hope that they pull through it.
this poem is a little short, but still strong and gets the point across, i also like the rythem sceme, simple yet still, gets the point across. i cant think of anything that i would change in this poem! keep writing!
always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :)