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I...Am Inspired
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I...Am Inspired |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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This is meant for everyone who's writing I've ever read. I...Am Inspired I want to write something. I want ot take this wand in my hand and make my magic. I feel inspired. Inspired like and artist of any kind by another. By a writer. A close soul to my heart who's art is words. By a singer who's voice i the pen or the brush that lives. By a painter. Colors of variety and formation unmatched. Until magic, art, or life shall end... I...am inspired. Jeremy Halstead 6-2-00 |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Wow, great poem! Very....inspirational! (can't think of another word for it  )"Suicides have already betrayed the body. Still born, they don't always die, bu dazzled, they can't forget a drug so sweet that even children would look on and smile." -- "Wanting to Die" by Anne Sexton Adversity Builds character. - Japanese Proverb "'Even a fool has one talent'.....darn, I'm not even a fool." - My sister, the master of cunning wit |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
nicely put Jeremy! I hope I have inspired you in some way...lol. I doubt it though, hey check your e-mail!  well I love the poem, your analogies are wonderful! Love Always~*~Jess~*~  hey and behave your self tonight!!   |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Good analogies and good writing. I love to read more keep posting please..lol. Luv, Jeana "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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Novacaine For The Soul Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 122New Orleans |
dear jeremy: this is a wonderful free-verse work... i can't say i'm much for critiquing free-verse since i know little about it and it really has no form or structure, but i do know what i like and what i dont... and this, i like... keep up the good work sincerely, a sad tomato you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you... |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
ok, i really like the poem, and i feel the same way right now, i want to write something,but i dont no what, well, that and im very tired, i probably didnt even get the deeper meaning of most of the poem, i need SLEEP!! anyway, i know exactily what u mean, isall i can say without the possibility that i might say something stupid in my sedated state anyway, good poem! always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Being inspired is a wonderful thing that many of us take for granted. You describe it well. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
I feel like that, every time I hear a good song, or see the moon, or just get that 'feeling'. Wonderfully put. |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Oh wow, GREAT poem! I know exactly what you mean! Sometimes when I can't express what I want to say I'll find what someone else has written and it's exactly what I've been trying to get out! Cool idea for a poem too. I'm always inspired but it never occured to me to write a poem about what inspires me. lol. It was nice of you to dedicate it to all the talented writers too. I feel the same way about so many poets and writers here at passions, and you are definitely one of them Jeremy. Again, AWESOME job! Love and hugs, Kandi/Kris ~*All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe *~ ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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