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My Spanish Love

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JennyeMeshan
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since 02-15-2000
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Cecil, Wisconsin USA


0 posted 06-09-2000 08:57 PM       View Profile for JennyeMeshan   Email JennyeMeshan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JennyeMeshan


Your words make my heart pound,
In a rhythm never found,
You are so sweet and tender,
You make my body surrender,
I have never seen your face,
Or ever felt your loving embrace,
Everything is changing,
For my spainish love.

I dream of you at night,
Where love feels so right,
You make my pain go away,
With the words you say,
What did I do to get?,
Have we ever met?,
What progress we're making,
For my spanish love.

The suspense is killing me,
Is there a chance we are meant to be?,
Time will tell but I'm impatient,
For me a brand new sensation,
I want to go where you've been,
I want to see what you've seen,
This, A strong feeling,
For my spanish love.

~JeNnYeMeShAn

This poem is about a guy I know named Rommeo who is a total romantic and he has proven it to me by the sweet words he speaks to me. I thought I'd give him something back.  




 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

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Novacaine For The Soul
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since 05-26-2000
Posts 129
New Orleans


1 posted 06-09-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for Novacaine For The Soul   Email Novacaine For The Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Novacaine For The Soul

dear jennye:
     i'm actually quite impressed by the first stanza of this poem... i think you're showing your true poetic talent here... it seems that you traded smooth verse for statement in the last two stanzas though... keep up the good work and i'll keep an eye out for your future poems...

sincerely,
a sad tomato
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


2 posted 11-15-2007 07:09 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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