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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I wish I could say I love you, but you know how hard that is. When you have a broken heart, I just can't say this. I wish I could say I love you, it's harder then you'll ever know. I need to say I love you, before you have to go. I wish I could say I love you, but I don't think that you'd care. I just want you to know that, I will always be there. I wish I could say I love you, but I bet you'll never know. And know that I know I love you, I'm sad to see you go. ---------------------------------------------------- Oh my. I'm in love. Today was my last day of school and yesterday was graduation and well I still have one year left, my love, Zack, left my school and I don't know what to do. I was crying when he left, and he was like, don't cry, you're not the one leaving, and he gave me fity million hugs. Should I call him? What do I do? Help me! Loves may seem forgotten, but the true will once shine through. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
If there is love then it will really show through. Some people are full of ego and false pride and try to hide ....I guess you'e not 1 of them...go ahead and say whats in your heart and its the right thing to do ....if a person is broken hearted then it'll definitely be rejoicing that he's being loved.. and definitey it'll lead to healing. Sincerely A_L |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It is hard to say something that seriuos to someone who probably right now doesn't trust anyone. A broken heart will have a hard time accepting you, but you never know unless you say it. Truthfully, I was in the same situation. Though she said that i've shown her the most respect, care, and love, it still scares her for she doesn't want to hurt again. Now, I'm the one who is hurting and believe me, I'm not ready to open up to anyone either. Still, you will never know unless you try. Love your poem |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
may be you're right but its better to give it a shot before its turned into just longing and then pain and finally some totally negative feelings..which are not good for health Sincerely A_L |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
If I was ignorant to this I would say go for it. I was in this situation and I hit the gun and said it. I confessed all. all my feelings my emotions...everything! It scared him away. I will never ever again trust any one to be strong enough to tell them how I truly feel deep down inside! I'm not saying don't do it b/c that wouldn't be right of me. Just make sure you know for sure this is how you truly feel and be prepared for the outcome!!! GOOD LUCK I HOPE IT ALL WORKS OUT FOR YOU!!! Love Always ~*~Jessica Lynn~*~ |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
i say you should jus show him the poem, i mean, either it was meant to be or it wasnt, its better to get ur feelings out in the open than to hide it inside, woundering what he'll say when u finally tell him, but u never do as i said, either he likes you too or not, time probably wont change it, not unless ur gonna see him alot this summer, which i dont think is gonna happen if i read between the lines the right way... so go ahead and get it over with, either you'll bring him closer or push him away, and if u dont tell him, itll probably eat you up inside always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thank you all for your advice and for readiing this. It's important for you to read my poems considering no one at my school will. I'm still unsure about what to do, but i think he likes me. Loves may seem forgotten, but the true will once shine through. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Allysa:This is an emotional poem that obviously illustrates your love for Zack. If true love is meant to be it will be. Tell him how you feel and let the ball roll from there.  But don't tell him everything...just enough to keep him interested  Good Luck. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Actually, the reason I'm very cauttious ( I tend to jump into things) is because I got stuck in this situation once before with a guy named Tommy. Bad memories. What I think I'm going to do is, because I don't think I'll see him again this summer, I think I will send him the poem via mail. I know he loves to get things in the mail and I know I'd never have the guts to read it to him on the phone. What do you think? Does this sound allright? Loves may seem forgotten, but the true will once shine through. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
do things with caution and as you've some bad memmories too. i guess mail is a good idea too if its hard to speak out on phone.. Sincerely A_L |
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angelgirl0849 New Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 5Florida |
Hey I've been in a similar sitch. I told him exactly how I felt and he said he loved me...like a sister! It's been really hard, but even harder because now he's dating my cousin. We're still best friends, me and him. I suggest you tell him anyways, if he doesn't share the same feelings, it's his loss. If he does, well then, use your imagination and have lots of good times! Good luck! |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
I suggest that you should just jump in there and go for it. You never will know what will happen if you don't. You take chances of getting hurt. I would rather find out if he feels the same way or not than not know at all. I've been there I wish I would of told him how I felt now I don't see the guy anymore. You've just got to get gutsy and take the chance. If you do let us know what happens k. Good Luck!! Jeanna "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks ya all. I just want to add this to my library., Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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